托福独立写作的开头很重要，能不能把握住阅卷者这也是一个关键点。可是，在场场考试中，总有批量的考生败北在写作开头。这里对失败作品进行归类吐槽，各位考生引以为戒，早日回头。

1、废话连篇急煞读者

　　失败案例：

　　Topic --Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　This topic is very interesting. I am very interested in talking about this topic. Because I am also a college student and I am not married……

　　修改方案：开门见山 直奔主题

　　In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。

　　2、观点不明态度暧昧

　　失败案例：

　　Topic--Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

　　3、渐行渐远 离题千里

　　失败案例：

　　Topic---It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

　　I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places。

　　4、中式英语人见人跪

　　失败案例：

　　Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life

　　In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

　　Topic 2- The population problem

　　The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there。

　　Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?

　　I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chop when I go out buy things……

　　Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

　　Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a person always does bad things, he will get “baoying”。

　　5、语法错误惨不忍睹

　　失败案例：

　　Topic---If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?

　　About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should。

　　6、过分简单没有重点

　　失败案例：

　　Topic---The importance of environmental protection

　　This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

　　7、用词不当表达不准

　　失败案例：

　　Topic--Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family。

　　8、意思重复徘徊不前

　　失败案例：

　　Topic--Your opinion on DINK families

　　My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society。

　　9、中国俗语随心翻译

　　失败案例：

　　Topic 1---Is it good to have a large family?

　　I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……

　　正确说法：Happiness lies in having many children

　　Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?

　　We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know, don’t know is don’t know”……

　　Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

　　Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole……

　　Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

　　I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”。

　　10、观点武断脱离实际

　　失败案例：

　　Topic1--The importance of confidence

　　In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed。

　　Topic 2 -- The solution to the traffic problem

　　I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more。

　　以上就是小编为你带来的托福独立写作之开头备考，希望对大家有所帮助。