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楷维留学指南分享谢侃解析2013年10月5日亚太地区SAT考试写作。这次SAT写作分析的十分透彻,因此分享给大家,希望对大家有所帮助。
Prompt:
Everythinga public figure or celebrity says or does is likely to turn up on an Internetsite or television shows. The great appeal of these sites and shows is thatthey help us learn as much as possible about public figures. The more we knowpolitical candidates, for example, the more informed we are as voters. Much ofthe information, however, is irrelevant and actually prevents us from focusingon the issue.
Assignment:
Doeshaving too much information about public figures distract us from the importantissues?
开头层次:全文中心句(TS)+例子预告
* 中心句(明确的观点及简要理由):对名人或公众人物信息太多不会影响我们的判断,因为信息越多,越能让我们全面地了解和把握他们。
· 开头的推荐模版:
Determiningwhether having too much information about public figures distract us fromthe important issues could be weighed in many aspects. Different peoplehave different answers due to their respective point of view. On balance, myview is that too much information is unlikely for us to be away from keypoints because the better we are informed, the better understanding of thosepublic figures. Examples can easily be found to make this point clearer. 克林顿(例子1) is a case in point. Another case is that NickVujicic (例子2).
*划线处可以根据论题内容自由填充
例子一:克林顿(原始素材,来自wiki):
1)当政期:
Electedpresident in 1992, Bill Clinton presided over the longest period of peacetimeeconomic expansion in American history, and signed into law the NorthAmerican Free Trade Agreement. In 1996, Clinton passed welfare reformand the State Children's Health Insurance Program, providing healthcoverage for millions of children. In 1998, he wasimpeached for perjury before a grand jury and obstruction of justice during alawsuit against him, both related to a scandal involving a White House intern(负面信息). He was acquitted bythe U.S. Senate and served his complete term of office. The CongressionalBudget Office reported a budget surplus between the years 1998 and 2000, thelast three years of Clinton's presidency.
2)后总统生活
Clintonleft office with the highest end-of-office approval rating of any U.S.president since World War II. Since then, he has been involved in publicspeaking and humanitarian work. Based on his philanthropic worldview, Clintoncreated the William J. Clinton Foundation to promote and address internationalcauses such as prevention of AIDS and global warming.
3)对华态度
克林顿政府,在经济上对中国采取友好态度,一方面多次延长对华最惠国待遇,另一方面还支持中国加入世贸。所以,克林顿对中国经济融入世界起到了积极的作用。
*总结:SAT例子段1:(注意“三明治”结构):主题句+例子+评论
大家对克林顿的评价是正面积极的,虽然有那起震惊全球的桃色事件。可能很多人一提到克林顿,就会想起发生那起发生在在10几年前震惊世界的桃色新闻(描述一番),但是这样的新闻不会影响大家对这位伟人的历史判断,列举他当政时和卸任后的政绩(包括对华态度)。所以即便有重大负面信息,也不会影响我们对基本事实的判断。
例子二:著名残疾人Nick Vujicic (原始素材,来自wiki)
Nick Vujicic is anAustralian motivational speaker born with tetra-amelia syndrome, a raredisorder characterized by the absence of all four limbs.
Asa child, he struggled mentally and emotionally as well as physically, buteventually came to terms with (与…达成妥协)his disability and, at the age ofseventeen, started his own non-profit organization, Life Without Limbs. Vujicicpresents motivational speeches worldwide on life with a disability, on hope,and on finding meaning in life. He also speaks about his belief that God canuse any willing heart to do his work and that God is big enough to overcome anydisability.
Vujicic gradually figured out how to live a full lifewithout limbs. He writes with two toes on his left foot and a special grip thatslides onto his big toe. He knows how to use a computer and can type up to 43words per minute using the "heel and toe" method. He has also learnedto throw tennis balls, play drum pedals, get a glass of water, comb his hair,brush his teeth, answer the phone and shave, in addition to participating ingolf, swimming, soccer, and sky-diving.
总结:SAT例子段2(注意“三明治”结构):主题句+例子+评论
第一次看到尼克照片的人,会下意识地觉得他什么都干不了,这是我们的思维定势(stereotype),但是如果你了解越多nick的信息,越会觉得他是一个了不起的人。介绍他的外貌,无手无脚,但是凭借顽强的意志和与人分享的精神,学会了做很多生活中无手脚之人没法做的事情(列举出来),还做了很多励志演说和成立慈善机构,去激励更多的人不惧困难,阳光地面对生活。大量的信息可以让我们更丰富、更全面地去了解Nick,而不是只是停留在“残疾人”这个认知上。
-->Nick Vujicic的例子可以套入2013年10月北美SAT考题:
Doesbeing content with the way things are prevent people from improving themselves?
* “beingcontent with the way things are”: 满足于事情本来的样子(而不去改变它)
>>>作者介绍
谢侃,侃哥Kevin,杭州新东方资深教师,北美留学考试课程主力老师。教授托福强化口语,GRE强化阅读,SAT强化阅读和考研强化翻译课程。听说读写译功底深厚。
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