楷维留学指南,第一留学服务平台

　　有关学习计划!!

　　感觉这个相当相当滴重要~~感觉VO拒你滴什么学习能力~~移民倾向这些原因，很大程度上需要你SP来打消人家滴怀疑~~~!!!!即使你找中介~~也要自己搞定SP

　　呵呵 把偶自己滴SP贴出来讨论一下。。。。。专家高手无视就好

　　Study Plan

　　Dear visa officer：.

　　My name is ***, female, born on 27th of Feb ** in Qingdao, Shandong province, China. I received my admission to Qingdao University in 2007, majoring in English.. After much calculation, I believe that studying abroad to broaden my horizon is a better choice for me. Therefore, I’m applying a further study in Canada. In this case, I can not only improve my English, but also have a more challenging and promising major that I’m interested in ---Accounting and Finance.(第一段主要是把自己滴情况主要表述了一下，以及这个出国打算)

　　In my view, Canada has a more peaceful and harmonious environment for studying and it is rich in educational resources comparing to other countries.(加拿大方面滴优秀之处一笔带过) The reason that I choose Seneca is for its true knowledge learning and real experience gaining. Unlike Chinese universities or colleges, Seneca offers co-operative education programs that allow students to gain real work experience and apply what they have learned in the workplace. A more attractive factor is Seneca offers many different opportunities for students’ success. Students are able to transfer credits from some of its diploma programs to its degree programs, and Seneca has transfer agreements with educational institutions across Canada and even around the globe. (介绍seneca，说实在，偶真不知道怎么说，然后就到它滴网站上看人家怎么说滴，然后自己再写滴。感觉要写优点。更要写对你有用滴优点，因为我在下面提出seneca只是一个桥梁，过渡期后会再转学滴。所以说了seneca滴转学校方面。说了这个学校实践性比较强，是国内大学不可比滴。。这样才体现了放弃原有大学去学个这个college滴必要性么。。。)Thus, with those opportunities, I am sure I will at a higher level after I complete my study in Canada.

　　The program of Accounting and Finance offered by Seneca College attracts me just like a bridge to a higher education. In this program, many important subjects are provided, such as Accounting Basics,Business Statistics,Mathematics of Finance,Organizational Behaviour,

　　Co-op Professional Theory, and Quantitative Approaches to Decision Making

　　etc. As far as I’m concerned, those subject regarding accounting and finance are quite necessary to me. I can get a better understanding on accounting knowledge and get closer to a true accountant through them. Moreover, I’m quite interested in the Organizational Behaviour and Quantitative Approaches to Decision Making which can give me a chance to be wiser and of great executive ability. (你必须说清楚你将要学习的专业，大家最好说一下自己的课程，其中具体课程的名字，例如第一学期有些什么重要的课程，第二学期有什么，你感兴趣的，等等，必须写清楚，这样签证官就会觉得你很认真，是过去学习的!!!!课程你自己从学校网站上找，都找得到。)

　　What I have planned is that after a period of adaptive phase, I will go to a university for a degree and then one-year’s master. matter what, I want to pass CA (chartered accountant) exam during my study in Canada, and then back to China to apply myself into accounting and finance.(提到自己滴目标和打算，让人家感觉你是个很有计划有目标滴好孩子!!而且说了自己会回国)

　　My parents have sufficient money to supply me to study abroad and steady income. They are definitely willing and able to afford my education.(小提一下父母提供了资金~~) In fact, I’m an easily homesick girl. What’s more, I always put my family, my parents first. From the date of my birth, my parents spare most of their love, time and money on me. I’m so grateful for having such parents. However, my parents are not young and healthy as before any more. Going back to China and take good care of them after finishing my study is my responsibility.(说出父母滴原因~~~偶必须回国) In additional, China’s governmental policy is more attractive to me.

　　The government values the returned students more and more highly. With the development of China, large amounts of qualified people are in great demand. Accordingly, there are sufficient job opportunities for returned students, and suitable conditions supplied for their personal and professional development. I believe that if I go back to China, I will have a brighter employment prospect. (说出外部条件，偶回国会很好~~~)

　　应该说，偶滴SP也改了很多遍。。。一开始滴时候有将近两页捏。。。而且还弄了outline，写滴相当详细。。。后来经过不少人指点~~尤其一个在多college念硕士文凭滴哥哥给了最大滴帮助~~~他就是自己DIY~~而且只是个college~人家20多天就来体检表了。。。唉~~~其实偶米寄掉体检表滴话，也差不多挺快滴。。。

　　一些小建议

　　1，出去念书，以及去这个学校念书，要说出你自己滴意愿!!你自己滴原因。。千万别说你父母希望你出去。。你父母感觉怎么样。。。而且我觉滴，说自己从小梦想出国也挺牵强。。。

　　2，SP一定要拒绝模板~~~每个人滴情况各有不同!!而且你需要SP去体现你自己滴想法~~坚决不要雷同!!雷同卷万一碰上了那就是咔嚓了~~

　　3，SP不是要求你写作文~~华丽滴句子，优美滴词藻~~这些都不是必须滴。花里胡哨滴。。。大汗捏

　　你只要说得明白，讲得清楚，说得让人信服~~那就是王道!!!

　　4，SP最好是一页纸，不要多了，但也不能少，400词左右。。。偶写滴就有点多，，，虽然也是一页但是500多字了。。。