【GMAT考试】2011年10-11月作文机经

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　　advantage： make students better prepared for the future competition， etc.

　　disadvantages:very pressure and stressful

　　a refined Educational system is preferred

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　　I don’t think it is a good idea to Design an Educational system that focuses mainly on competition. For although a little competition might produce desired results， in the long run too much competition will be destructive. Instead， I believe that our national economic success will be better promoted by an Educational system that encourages cooperative learning among students， and with students from other countries.

　　Granted， competitiveness is an important aspect of human nature. And， properly directed， it can motivate us to reach higher and produce more， not to mention meet deadlines. But being competitive fixes our focus externally， on marking and beating the proGREss of others with whom we compete. Such external motivation can direct our attention away from creative solutions to our problems， and away from important human values like cooperation and fair play. Indeed， a highly competitive environment can foster cheating and ruthless back-stabbing within an organization， and ill-will and mistrust among nations. In the extreme case， competition between nations BEComes war.

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