GMAT考试在5月6日进行了换库，楷维留学小编为大家整理分享两篇5月7日GMAT作文机经，其中一篇是5月7日成都GMAT考试作文机经，考生朋友可以看看，作为一个复习GMAT的参考。

5月7日GMAT作文机经一

　　“The construction last year of a shopping mall in downtown Oak City was a mistake. Since the mall has opened, a number of local businesses have closed, and the downtown area suffers from an acute parking shortage, and arrests for crime and vagrancy have increased in the nearby Oak City Park. Elm City should pay attention to the example of the Oak City mall and deny the application to build a shopping mall in Elm City.”

　　【参考思路】

　　1、Gratuitous Assumption——无根据结论： A 不导致B

　　1商场的建立不一定导致local businesses关门：shopping mall吸引人气，商场附近会有更多人流，潜在顾客会增多，反而可能使当地的商业繁荣

　　2商场的建立不一定导致停车场不足：长期来看，shopping mall会使当地税收增加，政府有更多的钱用来修路和停车场，停车问题会改善

　　3商场的建立也不一定导致犯罪和流浪汉增多，商场的建立会增加就业机会，穷人有了稳定的工作就不会去犯罪或者流浪，长期看会减少犯罪和流浪者

　　2、有他因

　　1local商业关门可能是其他原因造成的，如政府税收太高，当地商人纷纷选择移民

　　2停车场不足可能是其他的因素造成，比如正值非洲66国元首集体访问oka市，市政府采取单双号限行，造成车位紧张

　　3犯罪和流浪者增多可能是其他因素造成的，比如房价太高，大学生毕业找不到工作，只好选择犯罪或者流浪

　　1、 False analogy:(Oak city 和Elm city 不能做类比，因为这两座城市的经济状况，基础设施和生活水平都是不同的。)

　　2、可疑调查survey is doubtful(以上提到的几项调查数据全部来源不明，可能不够中立客观)

　　【参考范文】

　　此范文与该题略有出入，是老版本的题目，请大家在考场上小心：

　　老题题干：

　　“The construction of last year of a shopping mall in downtown Oak City has done little for the residents of the community. Since the mall has opened, a number of local businesses have closed, and the downtown area suffers from an acute parking shortage. In addition, because the mall’s owner lives in nearby Elm City, the profits derived from sales at the mall are not being returned to the community. These problems, coupled with the increase in trash and litter in nearby Oak City park, demonstrate that Oak City did not use good judgment in allowing the construction of the mall in the first place.”

　　In this editorial the author rebukes Oak City for allowing the construction of a new downtown shopping mall. Citing a number of problems that have occurred since the building of the mail, the author concludes that the residents of Oak City have not benefited from the mail and that Oak City exercised poor judgment in allowing the mail to be built. Among the problems cited by the author are the closure of local businesses, lack of parking in the downtown area, and increased trash and litter in a city park near the mall. Moreover, the author argues that profits derived from sales are not benefiting Oak City because the owner of the mall lives in another city. The author’s argument is problematic in several respects.

　　In the first place, the author assumes that addition of the new mall is the cause of the various problems cited. The only evidence offered to support this claim is that the construction of the mall occurred before these problems manifested themselves. However, this evidence is insufficient to establish the claim in question. A chronological relationship is only one of the indicators of a causal relationship between two events.

　　In the second place, the author has focused only on negative effects the mall has had on the city. A more detailed analysis of the situation might reveal that the positive benefits for the city far outweigh the problems on which the author focuses. For example, new jobs might have been created for the residents of Oak City, and tax revenues might have been increased for the city. Lacking a more comprehensive analysis of the impact of the mail on Oak City, it is presumptuous on the part of the author to conclude that Oak City’s decision to allow the mall to be built was incorrect.

　　In conclusion, the author’s argument is unconvincing. To strengthen the argument the author would have to demonstrate that the construction of the mall caused the various problems mentioned. The author would also have to show that the negative effects of the project outweighed the positive effects.

5月7日GMAT作文机经二（成都）

　　The following appeared as part of an article in the local newspaper:

　　Our factory in Cookville is our most advanced and efficient. It is capable of producing ten drill bits for each of production costs, whereas none of our other factories can produce more than seven drill bits per dollar of production costs. Therefore, we can reduce our overall drill bit production by devoting the Cookville factory entirely to drill bit production. Since reducing the production costs of individual machine parts is the only way to achieve our larger goal of reducing our overall production costs, dedicating the Cookville factory entirely to drill bit production and shifting all other machine part machine to our other factories will help us to attain that larger goal.

　　【参考思路】

　　这个argument 的思路绕来绕去就是有three mojor flaws: reduce costs by devoting entirely drill bit production to C; the only way to reduce costs is to reduce production costs; shifting the production of the other parts to other factories is the appropriate way to go

　　针对这三个 direct or indirect conlusions 写就行了

　　1: although C produce more bits per dollar, the reason may be that C has high- skilled workers, total new and high- quality machines, or less amounts of orders(订单) thus entirely shifting is fallacious, the results may be that the workers may be too tired and have too much burden, the machines would be worn out, and all this could contribute to the lowering of the productivity

　　2: the management assumes without further more evidence that reucing the productions costs is the only way to enhance cost -effective production process: 可以train workers , 引进new technologies, 定期维修老旧设备，提高management strategy...

　　3: 就是转移制造这一部分：也许转移制造之后 cargo and transporting fees would roar因为sporadically 分布的 工厂可以及时供货，集中在一个地方不利于 供货， 而且shifting 牵扯到 搬家的费用：那些cumbersome machine怎么转移啊,人员怎么迁移啊。。。这些都是huge expense, may not weighover the elevation of the productivity

　　以上就是楷维留学指南整理的2013年5月7日GMAT考试写作机经及其解题思路分析，考生朋友可以有选择的选用，最后祝大家都能考出好成绩。