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美国大学Common App申请论文option 5写作技巧

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  使用Common Application申请美国大学让申请者们体会到诸多便利的同时又倍感头疼,到底要写出一篇怎么样的Essay才能同时让这么多所美国大学的招生官感到满意呢?下面,楷维留学指南小编就Common Application Essay中的Topic 5为大家提几点写作技巧。

  美国大学申请Common Application essay topic 5:A range of academic interests, personal perspectives, and life experiences adds much to the educational mix. Given your personal background, describe an experience that illustrates what you would bring to the diversity in a college community, or an encounter that demonstrated the importance of diversity to you.

  学术兴趣、个人观点、生活经验都能有效增加教育群体多样性。说明你的个人背景,描述一个个人经验,由此说明你能增添大学的多样性,或者说明一个文化多样性的校园对你的重要性。

  Realize that this question defines "diversity" in broad terms. It's not specifically about race or ethnicity (although it can be). Ideally, the admissions folks want every student they admit to contribute to the richness and breadth of the campus community. How do you contribute?

  美国大学申请Common Application essay topic 5写作技巧一: Diversity Isn‘t Just About Race(多样性指的并不是种族)

  The prompt for option #5 explicitly states that you should define diversity in broad terms. It isn't just about skin color. Colleges want to enroll students who have a diverse range of interests, beliefs and experiences. Many college applicants quickly shy away from this option because they don't think they bring diversity to a campus. Not true. Even a white male from the suburbs has values and life experiences that are uniquely his own.

  美国大学申请Common Application essay topic 5写作技巧二:Understand Why Colleges Want "Diversity"(要理解学校为什么会希望多样性)

  Option #5 is designed to give you an opportunity to explain what interesting qualities you'll bring to the campus community. There are check boxes on the application that address your race, so that isn't the point here. Most colleges believe that the best learning environment includes students who bring new ideas, new perspectives, new passions and new talents to the school. A bunch of like-minded clones have very little to teach each other, and they will grow little from their interactions. As you think about this question, ask yourself, "What will I add to the campus? Why will the college be a better place when I'm in attendance?"

  美国大学申请Common Application essay topic 5写作技巧三: Be Careful Describing Third-World Encounters(如果要写在第三世界的遭遇,请慎重)

  College admissions counselors sometimes call it "that Haiti essay" -- an essay about a visit to a third-world country. Invariably, the writer discusses shocking encounters with poverty, a new awareness of the privileges he or she has, and greater sensitivity to the inequality and diversity of the planet. This type of essay can too easily become generic and predictable. This doesn't mean you can't write about a Habitat for Humanity trip to a third-world country, but you want to be careful to avoid clichés. Also, make sure your statements reflect well upon you. A claim like "I never knew so many people lived with so little" can make you sound naive.

  美国大学申请Common Application essay topic 5写作技巧四:Be Careful Describing Racial Encounters(如果要写有关种族方面的遭遇,请慎重)

  Racial difference is actually an excellent topic for an admissions essay, but you need to handle the topic carefully. As you describe that Japanese, Native American, African American or Caucasian friend or acquaintance, you want to make sure your language doesn't inadvertently create racial stereotypes. I've seen a lot of essays in which students simultaneously praise a friend's different perspective while using stereotyping or even racist language.

  美国大学申请Common Application essay topic 5写作技巧五:Keep Much of the Focus on You(多写写你自己)

  As with all the personal essay options, #5 is asking about you -- what diversity you will bring to campus, or what ideas about diversity you will bring. Always keep in mind the primary purpose of the essay. Colleges want to get to know the students who will become part of the campus community. If your entire essay describes life in Indonesia, you've failed to do this. If your essay is all about your favorite friend from Korea, you have also failed. Whether you describe your own contribution to campus diversity, or if you talk about an encounter with diversity, the essay needs to reveal your character, values and personality. The college is enrolling you, not the diverse people you've encountered.

  以上几点就是在美国大学申请过程中,写Common Application essay topic 5时的写作技巧,希望对大家有所帮助。

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